This is exquisite. Your descriptions, the atmosphere, the dialogue -- everything. And I love the abrupt shift in Eddie's demeanor as it hits him that something's very wrong. And those little, light touches to Nick speak volumes. The dynamic between them here is wonderful.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2011-12-01 09:57 pm (UTC)Thank you! I *love* this!